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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，不过存在个别拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；能够使用一些简单的从句。
The above statistics from Bureau of Labor vividly description that the unemployment rate was gradually reducing and Median weekly earnings was steadily increasing according the inprovement of diploma level . The people of doctoral degree are the most highest in median weekly earnings and whom found the job is easy. However, what are reasons for it? To began with, with the development of society, every country is incredibily require to technique person. They need those people contribute to country. Moreover,corporation is also seeking the high IQ people whom can benefit to company's development. Finally, quite a few people are trying to improve their diploma degree in order to find a satisfying job that high earning and comfortable enviroment. To sum up, if you desire to find a good job, it's essential that learn more and improve to some diploma.
