2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,there are more and more computers appearing in our life.We can work and have a fun without a computer.So it is very important for us to own a personal computer and learn computer skills. In today's society,a man is related to a computer.There are three factors contributing to this phenomenon.First of all,with the rapid development of technology and economy,most of us must use a computer to work,for example ,we must use a computer to make a slide to show our work plan.Secondly,there are more and more malls on the Internet,some of us want to buy something at home.It is so convenient that they like to buy thing online.Last but no least,to decrease the pressure from life and woking,they want to release themselves by playing computer games and other multimeadia. In my opinion,in the future ,more and more can't leave the computer and will like the computer.The coputer will be welcomed.