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it is no denying that everyone have to draw a conclusion in our life.for example,he is a good man or a bad man.but obviously, it is not sensitive that you make a conclusion constsntly when you look something or listen something. on one hand,what you look or listen maybe treat you.typically,we also listen to the news that a movie star had died,so we become so sarraw that we can"t restrain ourselves.but the movie star claim that he is alive. on the other hand,even though what we look or listen is real,we can not promise that our judement is proper.when we konw a student drops out of university,we consider he as a bad student,maybe he will do a great career in many years. in a word,when we look or listen something,we‘d better prevent ourselves from drawing a conclusion then investigate the truth and calm down to analysis so that we can get a nurtual conclusion!
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