文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下。
it is no disclaiming that everyone have to draw a conclusion in our life.for example,he is a good man or a bad man.but obviously, it is not sage that you make a conclusion immediately when you look something or hear something. on the one hand,what you look or listen maybe treat you.typically,we also listen to the news that a film star had deceased,so we become so sarraw that we can"t restrain ourselves.but the film star claim that he is alive. on the other hand,even though what we look or listen is real,we can not promise that our judgement is proper.when we know a student drops out of university,we think about he as a unfavorable student,maybe he will do a great career in many years. in a nutshell,when we look or listen something,we‘d better prevent ourselves from drawing a conclusion then investigate the truth and calm down to analysis so that we can get a objective conclusion!
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