拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
it is no disclaiming that everyone have to draw a conclusion in our life.for example,he is a good man or a bad man.but obviously, it is not sage that you make a conclusion immediately when you look something or hear something. on the one hand,what you look or listen maybe treat you.typically,we constantly listen to the news that a film star had deceased,so we become so sorrow that we can"t restrain ourselves.but the film star tell us that he is alive. on the other hand,even though what we look or listen is real,we can not promise that our judgement is proper.when we know a student drops out of university,we think about he as unfavorable student,maybe he will do a great career in many years. in a nutshell,when we look or listen something,we‘d better prevent ourselves from drawing a conclusion then investigate the truth and calm down to analysis so that we can get a objective conclusion!
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