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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12932
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

The picture above vividly describes the phonomenon exsited in the communication between the teenagers and their parents in the society.The modern communication pattern-electronic communication not just offers people so much convenience, but also brings about many problems. It cannot be denied that electronic communication is faster ,namely, timeless, which in turn makes itself more and more popular among the youngers. People can even communicate with their friends who are far away from them. However, it widens the gap between people. Teenagers become much more busy that they don't have time to communicate with their parents face-to-face.Even the fact is that they all stay at home. Elctronic communication makes people gradually ignore their parents and friends. Those relationships don't seem that treasure to them any more. It is really dreadful. It shapes people more and more indifferent. Thus, I think people, especially teenagers should learn the bad effects of electronic comunication and spend more time with their family and friends rather than surfing online.

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