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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain ）。
（1）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
（2）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；作者词汇量偏小，另外文章有些单词拼写错误；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请注意分段。
Many parents help children for everything, they think this way can make best to improve children's ability, but they don't know what their children want, and how children's ability. If parents want their children more preferable , they should loose their hands for children , and children can decide something for themselves , but this is only a begin . Firstly , parents should to lead their children to solve some problem , teaching children for a problem how we solve it . After some days , parents could give some suggestion for children , according to this suggestion , children solve something for themselves , and day by day , children will turn more independent for something , and more profect.
