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Today i'm so glad to give my speech on How to relax ourselves after the exam. As the mordern world ,transport becomes more and more convenient.Many parents decide to go abroad with their children after the exam.It's really a good way for us to relax ourselves after all the year's hardworking.The natural world,the beatiful view,and different cultures for us to enjoy.So ,since you choose this way ,put the things that have bothered you for a long time.Instead,take some pictures or having the food you never try.Relaxing is the most impotant. If you don't have somuch time to travel,You can also take part in some entertainment activities such as,listen the music ,seeing the flim.And i think do some sports is also a nice solution to relax our preesure. In conclusions,enjoy you colouful life after the boring exam.