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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦75:How to relax ourselves after the exam

发布时间:2014-10-31 17:22浏览次数:1449
要求:
学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1. 去旅游,亲近大自然;
2. 参加娱乐活动,比如:听音乐、看电影……;
3. 进行体育锻炼;
4. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数:80~100,不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


How to relax ourselves after the exam
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Today i'm so glad to give my speech on How to relax ourselves after the exam. As the mordern world ,transport becomes more and more convenient.Many parents decide to go abroad with their children after the exam.It's really a good way for us to relax ourselves after all the year's hardworking.The natural world,the beatiful view,and different cultures for us to enjoy.So ,since you choose this way ,put the things that have bothered you for a long time.Instead,take some pictures or having the food you never try.Relaxing is the most impotant. If you don't have somuch time to travel,You can also take part in some entertainment activities such as,listen the music ,seeing the flim.And i think do some sports is also a nice solution to relax our preesure. In conclusions,enjoy you colouful life after the boring exam.

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