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Today i'm so glad to give my speech on How to relax ourselves after the exam. As the modern world ,transport becomes more and more convenient.Many parents decide to go abroad with their children during the holidays.It's really a good way for us to relax ourselves after all the year's hardworking.The natural world,the beautiful view,and different cultures for us to enjoy.So ,since you choose this way ,put the things that have bothered you for a long time.Instead,take some pictures or having the food you never try.Relieving the pressure is the most impotant. If you don't have so much time to travel,You can also take part in some entertainment activities such as,listen to the music ,seeing the flim.And i think do some sports is also a nice solution to reduce our preesure. In conclusions,enjoy you colouful life!