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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Success is a topic which is always referred to by almost everyone.Generally speaking,everyone want to achieve success and they try to do that.Although different people have different ideas about what is success,the way to success,in my opinion,is almost the same.My ideas are as follows. In the first place,we have to know what our success mean.When knowing that,we can set our goals within our abilities.What's more,we need self-confidence which can gives us motivation to go on.Most importantly,achieving success needs hard work.As the saying goes,"as we sow,shall we reap".If we don't devote our efforts to realizing our dreams,we will get nothing back. As far as I am concerned,the way to success means working hard with self-confidence and clear goals.There is no denying that it is easy to say,so we have to try our best to carry our plans out.Doing all that I have said cannot guarantee success,but more or less,it will do good to us.Hard work will pay off sooner or latter.

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