2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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i am very exceting that you will come my hometown ,if you went some place where is speial i could tell you yuan ming yuan park summer place and so on but in my opinion , i would like to take you go to yuan ming yuan park. the park is well know