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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦75:How to relax ourselves after the exam

发布时间:2014-10-31 17:22浏览次数:1445
要求:
学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1. 去旅游,亲近大自然;
2. 参加娱乐活动,比如:听音乐、看电影……;
3. 进行体育锻炼;
4. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数:80~100,不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


How to relax ourselves after the exam
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

用户练习作文:

Today I'm so glad to give my speech on How to relax ourselves after the exam. As the modern world,transport becomes more and more convenient. So it's easy for us to travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life. Since you choose this way,put the things that have bothered you for a long time away.Instead,take some pictures or having the food you never try. If you don't have so much time to travel,You can also take part in some entertainment activities such as listening to the music,go to the movie. And I think do some sports is also a nice solution to reduce our pressure.For example, playing a football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves. Above all, we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life. In conclusions,enjoy your colourful life!

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