山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

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Dear John: I am Li Hua .I am very sorry that I can promise the appointment with you. I really want to have dinner with you and I very thank you.Beacuse I have an importmant exam the day after tomorrow , I an busy.And I wish you have a good time. I will make another appointment with you and I will call you.