2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus Nowadays there are more and more campus aii over the world .Every students who study in the campus hope to have a big and beautiful school .Beacous of that ,it's important to establish a green campus .A green campus not only indicate a schooi built with green environment , but also has a good atomosphere where students can study actively .To creat a green campus , it's our duty to protect our beautiful school .First of all , when we are in class ,listen to the teacher caferlly and don't talk to your classsmates which is not important .Secondly , don't throw rubbish anywhere .And when you see rubbish in the ground ,you should pick up it right away . As far as i am concerned , every students should obey school'rules and struggle to be a intelligent student .Now it's our time to creat our green camous ,.Let's do it .