2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus Nowadays there are more and more campus all over the world.Every students who study in the campus hope to have a big and beautiful school.Beacous of that,it's important to establish a green campus.A green campus not only indicate a schooi built with green environment, but also has a good atomosphere where students can study actively.To creat a green campus, it's our duty to protect our beautiful school.First of all, when we are in class,listen to the teacher caferlly and don't talk to your classsmates which is not important.Secondly, don't throw rubbish anywhere.And when you see rubbish in the ground,you should pick up it right away. As far as i am concerned, every students should obey school'rules and struggle to be a intelligent student.Now it's our time to creat our green camous,Let's do it.