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Creating a Green Campus Nowadays there are more and more campus all over the world.Every student who study on the campus hope to have a big and beautiful school.Beacous of that,it's important to establish a green campus.A green campus not only indicate a school built with green environment, but also has a good atmosphere where students can study actively.To create a green campus, it's our duty to protect our beautiful school.First of all, when we are in class,listen to the teacher carefully and don't talk to your classmates which is not important.Secondly, don't throw rubbish anywhere.And if you see rubbish in the ground,you should pick it up right away. As far as I am concerned, every student should obey school'rules and struggle to be a intelligent student.Now it's our time to create a green campus,Let's do it.