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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11296
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;复杂句采用很棒;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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Nowadays,more and more people use cellphomes,in the street ,you can see people look at their cellphones when they crossing the rode. On the one hand, cellphones become more and more smart,so people think they can't leave it ,because it can help people in some way,for example ,it can help people's relatetion.in order to better convasate for people. On the other hand,beacuse of cellphone become cheap, people can afford it ,some people have two or three cellphones,

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