2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句数量稍显不足，且句子错误偏多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者词汇积累很好，但拼写检查还需加强。

Welcome to my hometown.Now, I will take you someplace in my hometown.You konw my hometwn in Chongqing,it is so beatiful, in the long run,there is a good city in China. The frist, I will take you go to my school,beacause there are so many books and Chinese culture,you can learn some culture to better in life.What's more, you can see so many Chinese childrens,they will excite to see you. the second, I will take you go to the cuntryside,maybe you don't understand it,but I will tell you, if you want to konw a lot of China change,you must go to countryside.Don't worry,there's people always easy-going. the last but important place is