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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Along with the improve of our life standard ,people not concent with being fed and clothed,they are more concerned about how to live more confortable.Therefore,they are invest money to education. It is obvious that a Doctoral degree is easier to find a job than Less than high school diploma.This aslo result in pople are more likely to invest education.This social phenomenon rooted in individual's opinion.For social ,if the more you got knowledge ,the more you abtain respect. For lots of parents,they are more expectant that their childrens get a job of high salary and more confortable.For children ,they believe that knowledge can change life ,and burden the presure from parents.Thus,they choose study hard. For my part,it is reasonable that people want to get a high salary enployment.But except we should learn more knowledge ,we are focus on skills of commuincatin,ability and so on.And know to do a people .

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