2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(54):夏令营活动

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my name is wangshang,age of 16,and is a female.I greduated from yangguang primary school in beijing.I enjoy taking a photograph,music,and is good at communicate with others.In addition,I like helping others ,crazying nature and paece .I want to take part in the summer camp,because i like making a friend and being aware of foreign culture.