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In recent years,student's mental health has been brought into focus as more and more students suffer from mental problems ,which cause the unnatural deaths rate getting higher and higher. As the pace of life becoming faster and faster,people’pressure on their work, study and lives become heavier and heavier.So mental health become a hot word in our common lives.As we all know, mental health is the based factor of being an excellent student.A healthy heart can do good to our study and lead us to have a happy life. It is nessary for school to carry out some activities to lead the students to have a healthy heart.For example,carry out various kinds of psychological health education activities which is useful to popularize mental health knowledge.Carry out some psychological health courage also means a lot. As for students, we should also do someting to keep our heart healthy.We should keep a good mood everyday and have the psychological health class.Read some meaningful book and have a talk with our teachers, friends and parents when we are in trouble. Mental heath means a lot to our lives.It is important for us to have a healthy heart.
