托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第19篇:20年后人们是否会有更多的业余时间

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As we borned,we sometimes think what we be in the future and what we would do.So we have more time for leisure activities?Jumping ahead 20 years,you should learn all subjects or just you like which can make you owning more leisure time.In my view,I think that people will have more time for leisure activities.As present situation,people became more convenient to get touch.But in other ways it also burden people stress and people have to learn more things so that can land jobs more earier.Fortunately,people are aware of it and take actions in some aspects.Under high stress,people may would ruin their work which had done before. So i image that we will be more freedom and leisure in the future.As the technology developed,the society need one that owns a good skill.