2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In 2011 years,people's averrage unemployment rate is 7.6%,and median weeekly earnings is $797.From the excel,we can clearly know that higher degree with lower unemployment rate but higher weekly earning.Therefore,we can conclude that if we want to earn more,we have to learn more and get higher degree.with increasing development,our society need more knowledgeable persons.