2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(54):夏令营活动

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My name is Wang Shan. I’m a 16-year-old girl studying in Beijing Yangguang Middle school. Listening to the music and taking photos are my favorite things to do in my spare time. I’m good at communicating with others and always ready to help other people. Furthermore, I love nature. Wherever I’m free, I’ll travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, for I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life. The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendshoip Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to have an access to the insight of foreign cultures. I hope I can do something for the world peace, and I’m sure I’ll be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.