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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6339
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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AS the saying indicates that good habits result from resisting temptation,suggesting the crucial important factor which played in developing process of good habits.And it's the high time that we're aware of that a good habit would influence the whole life of individual. With the society and industry developing rapidly,an increasing number of people show indifferent to their habits in daily life.They even don't know they are standing in the edge of desasters.As we all know,to develop a good habit,first of all,a determine should be kept in your mind and never tear it up.Secondly,you shoud keep resisting with temptations around your life.A multitude of youngsters cant't help in doing somthing,for instance,surf the Internet for a long time,play a phone on the class and so on.Last but not the least,keeping learning good habits from others.More good habits you have,more opportunities you would have to rich your life. As mentioned above,there is no denying in saying that a good habit ocupies a significent role in individual's growth.Without a good habit,no one can go further in the way of life.

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