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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As the saying goes, happiness or sadness, you have to spend today. So, why shoudn't we be happy? There's no deny that life is full of problems. Thus, happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. Where's the happiness from? It's obvious that the happiness is the feeling when you had been suffering difficulties. That's why people always say, the sunshine is usually behind the wind and rain. From my standpoint, only we solved the problems in our life, can we find happiness. Therefore, how to develop our ability to deal with problem and be happy is our life learning course. First and foremost, we are ought to accept actively not escaping when we face problems. Secondly, if you have little ability to solve it, you can turn to anybody who can help you. Anyway, you must be brave enough and stubborn ambitious to it. Last but not least, you had better absorbing the experience and technoledge after solving the problems. All in all, just like the failure is the mother of success, the problem is aslo the mother of happiness. In condition, only we develop our ability to deal with problems, can we be happy.
