高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My Hometown In the past, my hometown was a large village dotted with variety of trees in the yards, and on the side of the streets or roads. There were brooks around our village with fishes swimming in the clear water. The houses where people lived were simple and old, and the streets were narrow. Working hard almost all year round, the peasants still lived a hard life. Now, my hometown has changed into another town full of big buildings, factories and shopping malls. There are cars and trucks running on the streets. However, with the development of economy and industry, the environment is deterioding. Trees were felled, brooks disappeared and no fishes could be seen any longer. It is very important to deal with the sources which have caused the environment bad.