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A Beautiful City in China Welcome to China.There are many beautiful places.As far as I'm concerned,I like Ningbo best.In this city,you can see many beautiful views and there people are friendly. Now,follow me to see the beauty of Ningbo.Here you can see many foods,they look beautiful and their tastes are as good as they look.Some of them are famous in China.Even in international. Then follow me,I will take you to see many people.They are all friendly and they are willing to make friends with you.I do believe that they will invite you to their homes for a meal. Expecting you arrive.And wishing you have a good time in China.
