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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦75:How to relax ourselves after the exam

发布时间:2014-10-31 17:22浏览次数:1449
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学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1. 去旅游,亲近大自然;
2. 参加娱乐活动,比如:听音乐、看电影……;
3. 进行体育锻炼;
4. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数:80~100,不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


How to relax ourselves after the exam
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可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文中词汇表达较为灵活,学术词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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As a students, we have to face the exams again and again. That makes us nervous and exhaused, so we need to relax ourselves after the exam. But how? What's the right way to relax? I think the best choise is a trip. Let's back our bag and leave the city where we live to find the beauty in the nature. Many people like climbing mountains. When they get to the top of the mountain, they feel relaxed, as if the wind can take their stress and annoyance away. Some people like fishing. When they sit by the lake, they not only fish, but enjoy the sunshine and breeze as well. They feel relaxed. If you don't like trip, you can take part in some entertainment to relax yourself. listening to the music, seeing a film or having drinks with your friends might be good choises.

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