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As a students, we have to face the exams again and again. That makes us nervous and exhaused, so we need to relax ourselves after the exam. But how? What's the right way to relax? I think the best choise is a trip. Let's back our bag and leave the city where we live to find the beauty in the nature. Many people like climbing mountains. When they get to the top of the mountain, they feel relaxed, as if the wind can take their stress and annoyance away. Some people like fishing. When they sit by the lake, they not only fish, but enjoy the sunshine and breeze as well. They feel relaxed. If you don't like trip, you can take part in some entertainment to relax yourself. listening to the music, seeing a film or having drinks with your friends might be good choises.