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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦75:How to relax ourselves after the exam

发布时间:2014-10-31 17:22浏览次数:1448
要求:
学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1. 去旅游,亲近大自然;
2. 参加娱乐活动,比如:听音乐、看电影……;
3. 进行体育锻炼;
4. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数:80~100,不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


How to relax ourselves after the exam
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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As a students, we have to face the exams again and again. That makes us nervous and exhausted, so we need to relax ourselves after the exam. But how? What's the right way to relax? I think the best choice is a trip. Let's back our bag and leave the city where we live to meet with beautiful nature. Many people like climbing mountains. When they get to the top of the mountain, they feel relaxed, as if the wind can take their stress and annoyance away. Some people like fishing. When they sit by the lake, they not only fish, but enjoy the sunshine and breeze as well. At that moment they feel relaxed. If you don't like travelling, you can take part in some parties to relax yourself. And you can listen to the music, see a film or have drinks with your friends. These activities are good choices to relax yourself.

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