从句偏少,建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear John sriscoll, I'm the general manager of sales department in Fox Electronic Comply. I'm honored on behalf of our company to inform you that the meeting date secdualed on 20th June. In the meeting we will discuss the launch date of the new product and the advertisting campaign. Plesase let me know if this would be converent for you or inform us your arrangement. Wish to establish long_term cooperative relationship with you. Thanks and best regards. Tom Smith