我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I like English,and I want to be an English teacher after 10 years.I will do my best to teach my students well,and do my best to teach in English. Besides,the students all like to listen the stories by their teacher,so I have to speak English stories to them and let they get interesting in English. And increasing their English listening ability. I believe that I will be a good teacher.