2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；可适当增加复合句的使用，注意个别句子错误；连词使用偏少。

In recent years,too many goods reflect an attracting phenomenon that goods was packaged on excessive.For instant,moon cake sold in a high price because their excessive packaging. I think the most important reason which caused the phenomenon is people had a unhealthy conception of comsuming.They think that something seem like a good goods standing for it was a good goods in comprehension.These conception lead residents to package goods on excessive for increasing interests. In my opinion,the condition that goods package on excessive is not a healthy circumstance in social.In order to alter this condition,I suggest that healthy ideal of comsuming conveys by media and the government should have a loyal about on excessive packaging .