2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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In china ,children is often diffcult to keep awly from their parents .Because chinses help their kids in anyways .For example ,parents will help their kids to choose their breakfast ,children only should eat it . But in fact ,parents should make their kids to be independent .first of all ,parents should let the kids make decisions by themselfs .If the kids have 18 years old, they should have their ideas .They need to deal with their problems in the life .As parents should only give some advice to them. Then parents should allow the kids to get a job .a job will help their kids learn to be independent .When they work with others ,they need to do many things by themselfs . in the last ,the aducation of parents is very necessary .some kids maybe fefuse to be independent .parents should help them in the spirit .parents can tell their kids the importance of independent .Of couse ,encourage is a useful ways to help kids to be dependent .