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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
要求:
题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分43.5分
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单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;简单句比重有点高且部分句子有错误;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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College students shouldn't hire cleaners Recently,There is a hot debate that whether the college students should hire cleaners.Different people have different opinions.As for me,as a student,I think that we shouldn't hire cleaners . Firstly, Recently,There is a hot debate that whether the college students should hire cleaners.Different people have different opinions.As for me,as a student,I think that we shouldn't hire cleaners .

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