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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12939
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

As is shown in the picture above,the parents only can talk with their children through the Internet.With the advance of the science and technology,the youth trend to communicate by the Internet.However,I don’t regard the electronic communication can take the place of face-to-face contact. On the one hand,face-to-face contact can close the relationship between parents and children.In this way,they can open the heart to talk with each other about what they inner thought.On the other hand,the electronic communication make people to talk only by the machine.As is known to all,language is peculiar to human being.Face-to-face contact can express our feeling through the language and body language rather than the computer or mobile phone. In conclusion,it’s convenient for us to talk by electronic communication,but the face-to-face contact still have a indelible impact on people communication.will not be replace by it.

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