2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From the graph,we can see clearly that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rate.People with doctoral degree ,the unemployment rate is 2.5%,and the median weekiy earnings is 1551.While those without even a high school diploma,the unemployment is 14.1% and earn less money than people with higher education. What cause this phenonomen appear? Firstly,people with high education learn more basic knowledge and practical skills to get a jod.Secodly,the more education we learn,the more confident we deal with difficulties confronted in our life .Thirdly,it is the knoeledge that by lay a solid foundation that countributions to our career and earn more advanced teachology. In a word,education really pays,let's study harder and strive for a brighter future.