2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

From the graph,we can see clearly that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rate.People with doctoral degree,the unemployment rate is 2.5%,and the median weekly earnings is 1551.While those without even a high school diploma,the unemployment is 14.1% and earn less money than people with higher education. What cause this phenomenon appear? Firstly,people with high education learn more basic knowledge and practical skills to land a job.Secodly,the more education we receive,the more confident we handle difficulties and stress confronted in our life ,thus achieving sustainable development in our career.Thirdly,it is the knowledge we have learned that contributions to our career and provide more advanced techology. In a word,education really pays,let's study harder and strive for a brighter future.