作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
when we facing a problem, which is the best way to handle it? some people may prefer to gathering and analyzing information. and they use the conclusion form the information to make a decision. on the contrary, some would like make a conclusion from what they seeing and hearing immediately. but in my view, the second thought is not wise. the reasons are as followed: firstly, if we do like that, we will skip the procession of thinking and analyse. what we seeing and hearing may have some not precise or implied information, which can hinder us to get a right decision. secondly, sometime the outcome may be very serious, which we cannot afford it. we need to think over and over before we make our mind.
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