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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40869
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

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when we facing a problem, which is the best way to handle it? some people may prefer to gathering and analyzing information. and they use the conclusion form the information to make a decision. on the contrary, some would like make a conclusion from what they seeing and hearing immediately. but in my view, the second thought is not wise. the reasons are as followed: firstly, if we do like that, we will skip the procession of thinking and analyse. what we seeing and hearing may have some not precise or implied information, which can hinder us to get a right decision. secondly, sometime the outcome may be very serious, which we cannot afford it. we need to think over and over before we make our mind.

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