2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

From the graph,we can see clearly that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rate.People with doctoral degree,the unemployment rate is 2.5%,and the median weekly earnings is 1551.While those without even a high school diploma,the unemployment is 14.1% and earn less money than people with higher education. What cause this phenomenon appear? Firstly,people with high education learn more basic knowledge and practical skills to land a job.Secodly,the more education we receive,the more confident we handle difficulties and stress confronted in our life,thus achieving sustainable development in our career.Thirdly, the knowledge we have learned that contributes to our career and provides more advanced technology. In conclulsion,education really pays,let's study harder and strive for a brighter future.