高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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When I was young ,I live in my hometown which is a little city I spent many nice time.There were many green trees and many kinds of fish in the long river.The houses there are simple and the streets are short,the people there were poor but kind. But now,my hometown changed hardly.There are many high buildings and supermarkets ,many cars running on the roads,the industry improve the economy but break the beautiful scene there .The trees were break down and the fish cannot be seen in the river.It is of big significance to cure the environment there.