题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨。
Today,the development of technology is pretty fast and change from day to night.We have tightly surrounded in the ocean of its productions.Computer,as one of the most popular affairs ,have yet occupied our most of time. Every coin has two sides,so does the computer.The member of people who like it is nearly same as those who don't. The views of two kinds of people are as follows. First of all, out of question,it is convenience of our daily life.For example,we can contact friends by E-mail over the computer,look up some useful information,and do some work by it,and so on.However,the other people find it evil and addicting to our mind.For the including of the computer is vast and complicated,we often spend the most of time in ding something useless,moreover,the computer game has become the major means of our entertainment to replace some traditionally healthy games. As for me,i think we should get along well with the computer.To get convenience from it,and avoid taking addict on it.