高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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When I was young,I live in my hometown which is a little city I spent nice time. There were many green trees and many kinds of fish swimming in the long river.The houses there are simple and crude,the streets are very narrow,and the people there were poor but kind. But now,my hometown changed hardly.There are many high blocks and supermarkets ,many cars running on the roads,the industry improve the economy while it break the pretty scene there .The trees were cut down and the fish cannot be seen in the limpid river.It is urgent for us to improve the environment there.