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The little city which I lived in when I was very young was so beautiful in the past time. There were many green trees and many kinds of fish swimming in the long river.The houses there are simple and crude,the streets are very narrow,and the people there were poor but kind. But now,my hometown changed hardly.There are many high buildings and supermarkets ,many cars running on the roads,the industry had made a big progress there.The trees were cut down and the fish cannot be seen in the limpid water.It is of great importance for us to improve the environment there.