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Wonderful and unforgettable,Pingle Ancient Town is such a suitable place that I would be gladful to take my foregin friends for a visit. Pingle Ancient Town is located in south Qionglai which is a small city belongs to Chengdu.It,s a beautiful town where trees and streams can be seen everywhere.Scenery there is fairly charming and relaxing.What,s more,Pingle Ancinet Town owes a lot of traditional Chinese streets which is very special. I think it,s very siginificant to let my foregin friend kown more about our county.s culture.Having a encounter with our tradition is the best gift I could offer him. So above all is the reason why I choose the Pingle Ancient Town.
