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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段。
Nowdays,electronic communicatian is more and more popular all around the world.As far as my knowledge is concerned that some children who are lodged in school and have no way to go home for a long time,so that it is a goog way for them to communicate with their parents on line when they miss their parents.So electronic communition sometimes is conventient to people who are lived in a long distance with others.But in the other hand,it is dangerous to you when you communicate with others on the Internet that you don't know. There are some examples about people who were cheated money because the electronic communition,so it is important for us to be concious about it.as far as I am concerned, electronic communication can't replace face-to face contect forever,bevause electronic is virtual and dangerous.
