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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；请注意分段。
Nowadays,electronic communicatian is more and more popular all around the world.As far as my knowledge is concerned that some children who are lodged in school and have no way to go home for a long time,so that it is a good way for them to communicate with their parents on line when they miss their parents.So electronic communication sometimes is convenitent to people who are lived in a long distance with others. But on the other hand,it is dangerous to you when you communicate with others on the Internet that you don't know. There are some examples about people who were cheated money because of the electronic communition,so it is important for us to be conscious about it.As far as I am concerned, electronic communication can't replace face-to face contact forever,because electronic is virtual and dangerous.
