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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;可将文中部分短句合并为长句,注意文中句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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It's not sensible that immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear .In my opinion,there is so important about coming to conclusion that think more than twice times. If you don't do this,you will make a lot of mistakes ,and almost you will lose something. For example, someone tell you apple is bad for our health and require you don't eat. If you immediately come to conclusion that apple is a bad fruit,then you are no sensible. you lose a chance about distinguish. Immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear will bring ourseleves some trouble,mistake and so forth.Thus, it's not sensible that immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear.

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