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It's not sensible that immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear .In my opinion,there is so important about coming to conclusion that think more than twice times. If you don't do this,you will make a lot of mistakes ,and almost you will lose something. For example, someone tell you apple is bad for our health and require you don't eat. If you immediately come to conclusion that apple is a bad fruit,then you are no sensible. you lose a chance about distinguish. Immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear will bring ourseleves some trouble,mistake and so forth.Thus, it's not sensible that immediately come to conclusion what you see or hear.
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