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作者词汇表达丰富多彩，但是要留意单词拼写；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Over the recent decades, human activities involved more and more in the natural world. Some plants and animal species even face the risk of extinction. Hence, some people believe that such negative effects can not be eliminated. However, other people suggest that there are still effective measures to be used to tackle those problems. By far, deforestation and poaching are till severe dangers that plants and animals are faced with. More and more kinds of wildlife are endangered now. For instance, the Amazon Forest has been undermined dramatically. A host of valuable trees has extincted. Elephants also suffered very much from poaching. They are killed as a result of the pursuit of profit of human. Besides, the process of urbanisation means some of the space belonging to wildlife before now is occupied by human society. Not only can not they find enough places to produce decendants, it also become more difficult to seek for food. What's worse, the solid waste produced in our life and sewage discharged by some plants has caused great damages to the living environment of plants and animals. Although the situation is urgent now, some still suggest some effective actions we can take to improve it. To begin with, more strict regulations and sanctions should be enforced, which could form the deterrent for the behavior of deforestation and poaching, as well as the improper discharge of sewage. This will contribute to the safty and cleanness of the habitat of the natural life. In addition, the government should take the wellfare of wildlife in consideration when they design the expanding plan and preserve their livin space. Apart from those methods, people's awareness of the harmonius relationship between wildlfe and human should be enhanced significantly. Only in such way, can all the useful measures be operated well. personnelly, i think We have to admit the fact that plants and animals are suffered much because some of human unapproriate activities and what we should do is to find the reasons and explore useful ways to improve the siituation and believe that we do this.
