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Teenagers’ Secrets Should be Shared with Their Parents This passage mainly says that many teenagers have their own secrets but parents always want to know them, which will probably hurt children’s feeling. As a result, children won’t like to share their secrets with their parents. Some people believed that parents should allow their teenage children to keep their own secrets. Teenagers are going through a special period .Wondering about and puzzled by changes of their body and mind, afraid to get misunderstood when their parents know it, they choose to copy adults’ behavior secretly. Parents should respect the right of their children . This idea sounds right but is actually wrong . Most of the teenagers’ secrets, if not at all, should be shared by their parents. Many of their secrets kept to themselves may do them unimaginable harm. I am speaking from my experience. Unlike many of other teenagers, I always let my parents know my secrets. They are always ready to offer me valuable advice about how to deal with my troubles and puzzles. I am happy to have such understanding parents who can share my secret with me and help me to live a happy life in this special time.